8/9/2012
About the Book
This is a nice touch on a BDSM style short story. Who doesn’t like a story that has spanking in
the title. You know you will have a
little redness somewhere in the story.
Good
The short story tells of a young woman in her early
twenties, who is ready to leave her house of father and three brothers. Don’t worry not going to give away the whole
story as you can read how she is able to move from being the baby of the family
to becoming a woman. Also, I want to add
kudos to Louisa, for the safe sex part of the story. She added something that gets overlooked in a
lot of stories, in my opinion.
Bad
The following is my opinions and should be taken with a
grain of salt. It starts with a type of
predictability but it does move into a story that changes direction and offers
you a twist.
Review Rating
I use three ratings
Read NOW: Pick it up now and read.
Put it in the stack: This represents the stack of books you
have that are not a priority.
Put on the bookshelf: Every story should be read. These sit on your bookshelf and sometimes you
have nothing in the stack, so you go to the bookshelf and pull it out. A bad book is better than good tv.
This book receives a Read
Now, which would be the equivalent to 5 star for those who are
wondering. It offers great character
development and a great storyline. Read
this story and it will make you want Louisa to give you more.
Enjoy your day and read as you will have a new story to live
in. X
Reviewed: Xavier Zyta
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Reviewed: Xavier Zyta
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This book starts off fast. You are taken into the world of "Mae's" from the beginning. What's a Mae you ask? Well you will have to read the book.
The book takes you on a wonderful journey that seems a bit familiar, yet comfortable, which the young adult and young at heart audience will like.
When I began this book I was excited to read it and now I know why. Joe has managed to capture a story that will enthrall you and has painted a wonderful picture in vivid detail in this world on the other side of the "veil".
This magical story combines Harry Potter, Alice in Wonderland, and Narnia all in one book.
I give this magical, well written story a 5 star rating as the story has a great flow and leads you into this world that Joe Egly has written. Definitely worth the read. Pick up your copy of this INDIE AUTHOR'S book.
Reviewed: Gabriella Deveraux
Reviewed: Gabriella Deveraux
6/23/2012
Author: Liz Adams
About the Book
Upon getting this assignment and I read the title, the first
thought was “Oh Goody” Alice is going to be a naughty girl, and can I get
Little Miss Muffet next? I went into the
story with an open mind, and as is said a good book starts off slow and builds,
oh wait, is that a good book or good sex.
To me the story did start a
little slow, but once it got its momentum it did not stop till the final period
of the story.
Good
The story was creative and pulled me into it, once it gained
momentum. The author offered just the
right amount of descriptions of scenery that offered me the ability to be right
there. The introduction of characters
throughout the story offered a new twist to the original. I was so glad that there were not the same
repetitive erotic actions within the story.
The author was very creative and once the rhythm established a great
beat it kept me intrigued to see what would occur next.
Bad
I am not sure if this is really bad but it does have a slow
start (the use of the term slow start for reviewing erotica has nothing to do with
regarding sex). The one thing that I had a problem with was
her sexual naivety with one who went to a university but this is a fairy tale
so it should be set with “Once Upon a Time”.
The use of the word virgin came up in the story that made me go, “uh sorry,
you are not a Virgin no more”, but that’s my opinion.
Review Rating
I use 3 ratings
Hot READ: Pick it up now and read.=5 stars
Put it in the stack,which equals to MILD HEAT: This represents the stack of books you
have that are not a priority.
Put on the bookshelf, which equals to SLOW BURN: Every story should be read. These sit on your bookshelf and sometimes you
have nothing in the stack, so you go to the bookshelf and pull it out. A bad book is better than good tv.
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Reviewed by: Xavier Zyta
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